Scene redraw - Mitsu and Ieyasu

I wasn't sure about posting this on dA too (since it isn't 100% an original idea), but welp here it is. I wanted to try and make one of those panel redraws, so I chose this scene from Judge End (upper panel: original scene, bottom: my redraw). It was funny trying to imitate the original anime style :3 I like how it looks. Idk how to do the border on the letters orz

My SenBasa folder: sataraki.deviantart.com/galler…

EDIT: I made a silly and much less dramatic version for a friend that wanted to use it as a wallpaper LINK